Poetry competition winners

The winners of the Poetry Competition have been announced

 

Adult winner :

Lesley Saunders, November 2011

 

Sculpsit

Fragment 1600 in city wall between west and south gates

(from Collingwood’s Roman Inscriptions of Britain: Bath)

 

Before anything else,

in broad-brush whitewash

paint her name, its slants

 

and uprights – angle

is everything.  Then find

the rhythm, so the mallet

 

knocks like the beat

of a heart, yours, hers.

The chisel’s metal bites

 

on limestone, setting

your teeth on edge

with the petrifying thicks

 

and thins of it, splinters

of rock fly like confetti,

serifs and glyphs

 

beginning to glint

in the glacial Britannic sun.

You spell her out

 

letter by perfect letter

carved and kerned to fit

the space you’ve kept for her

 

…ULIA….ILIA…

Her VIXIT ANNOS XXX

waiting in the stone.

 

‘Vixit annos XXX’ = she died aged 30.

 

Winner under 16 years:

Eloise Yeadon Caiger (age 11), November 2011.

 

The water of Sulis Minerva

 

The water is the spit of a devil,

Treated by the gods,

Still hot to the touch as it swirls around,

But no longer full of the devil’s curses,

It is filled with bubbles rising up,

The breath of Sulis Minerva,

It is filled with steam floating around,

The voice of Sulis Minerva,

And as your spirit flies in to the world of fairies, beasts and gods,

Let the steam engulf you, swallow you,

Let your soul journey far beyond your dreams,

To the land of Sulis Minerva.

 

Left to right: Judge Dr Carrie Etter, Winner Lesley Saunders and Roman Baths Manager Stephen Clews

 

Highly commended poems can be downloaded here.